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Booze Hound - Aged old Crone
You're a bitch babe
Sucking me dry
Believe me honey not in good way.
bitter regret and bile seeps from your pores.
When we first met you were a vibrant
Temptress a dusky beauty,
Now your are miserable old hag
Humourless and aged
Has old Booze Hound really been that bad?
Now this pretty little ditty is over
I turn over in bed and you have gone
I miss you and your dulcet tones
You old crone
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Comments
lou
Sat, 2011-12-10 22:27
Hi
thank you for reading, punctuation has never been my strong point, as you noticed LOL!!!
Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!