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Apocalypse - End of Days
Procreation a recreation of antiquity
micro populations confined by geographic boundaries,
spider webbing across the naked planet.
Verdant green sprouting, carpeting the stratum
Vegan life plan, wildlife annihilated ,
Adam’s Ale, liquid restrained.
Volcanic shudders, earth quakes threaten
Seismic clash, fissures appear
Imperceptible crash
Azure skies flood with ebony
Eruptions , oozing terror
Snuffing out life
End of Days
End of this world
Last few words:
The final chapter
Editing stage:
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Comments
Roscoe Lane
Tue, 2011-11-08 10:29
Sounds,
Sounds terrifying, but sounds so much like it could be for us if we don't slow down. Frightfully good. Love Roscooe..
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
lou
Tue, 2011-11-08 22:06
Roscoe
thank you
Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
wesley snow
Tue, 2011-11-08 15:16
This last one went a little over my head.
You mentioned once that you're considering expanding this a little through a story. Any truth to that? I would read. wesley
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lou
Tue, 2011-11-08 22:09
Wesley
i may write a short story, not sure if I could expand it into a book.
I'm glad that you like it.
Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
William Saint George
Tue, 2012-01-10 09:45
...And a Happy New year to you too!
What I like about this piece is how you used words to paint a chaotic picture in my mind. There didn't seem to be any central flow of thought; just descriptions of images all related to an End of World scenario.
I was quite a read, though I wish there were more to it. Much more to it.
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lou
Tue, 2012-01-10 22:47
Well
this poem is the last of a series of poems, to get the point one must read the others.
Lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
William Saint George
Wed, 2012-01-11 02:06
Thanks for the tip
Thanks for the tip
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