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To be brave is to live

In the hustle and bustle of everyday strife,
There are moments that bring a touch of life,
Small but beautiful, they sparkle and gleam,
Making our existence a wondrous dream.
A gentle breeze on a warm summer's day,
Caressing our skin as we laugh and play,
The sound of raindrops tapping on the roof,
A lullaby that whispers with a soothing truth.
A smile from a stranger passing us by,
A simple gesture that makes our spirits fly,
A heartfelt conversation, shared with a friend,
Words that uplift and help us mend.
In these small moments, life finds its grace,
A reminder that joy can be found in any place.

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Hello, Anna,
It's always wonderful to read your poetry. This is full of acts of bravery, but "...a smile from a stranger passing us by" really resonates with me. Thank you for this one.
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I love these lines:

In these small moments, life finds its grace,
A reminder that joy can be found in any place.

very well stated!

*hugs, Cat

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hi anna!!
what a lovely poem! Your sense of rhythm is delightful and I love the theme of this poem. Your love for living shines through and I love how you appreciate the smaller moments in life. very well done!

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