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Price

nothing comes in easy way
see,you always have to pay -
price can be of very high
or the smallest, they'd apply -
every thing that you can do
is worth something and it's true -
people built of all the things
they create and share, that brings
out what we are and
who we were, my friend -
what's the most important, well
it builds the future us, I'd tell

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Hello, Anna,
Your poetry causes me to think and feel - which is what poetry is all about. "Everything you can do is worth something." Along with "...it builds the future us..."
Words that add to the meaning of your strong title.
Sending thoughts out to you and your country.
Thank you,
L

Thank you so much! This means ridiculously a lot for me!

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and warmest regards...
L

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