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Rogue Luminary(Olympic Pool Workshop submission)
Acutely tuned sense
At the mere mention of a name
Merciless winds
Of emotional change
Only serve to fan the flames
Of a fervent desire to be
All that I want
All that I need
All that I am
Can become muddled
By touching the hand
Of one so wild and wired
The determinant agent
Of imaginations fire
Blazing a luminous trail to the heart
As rogue emotions
Pulse and surge
Through my conscience mind
Last few words:
emotions workshop topic Love
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Comments
Candlewitch
Mon, 2011-09-05 11:59
Dear Chrys,
The determinant agent
Of imaginations fire
Blazing a luminous trail to the heart
As rogue emotions
Pulse and surge
Through my conscience mind
Marvelous job and example of how it is done!
p.s.
we are missing the emotion sorrow from the topic list. Can it be included?
always, Cat
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raj
Tue, 2011-09-06 16:08
Chrys
All that I want
All that I need
All that I am
i feel those three lines breathe fire in this emotional write...
raj (sublime_ocean)