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Paul the piano player
Paul the piano player
let’s his hands
be symphonic sailors.
Rowing through
a rapid rhythm
trying to find
if his talent’s
with him.
But all he can
find is the
empty space
held within
his mind.
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Comments
Geezer
Tue, 2022-05-31 07:52
I have...
a couple of friends named Paul and this could be about either of them. LoL
I like the easy rhythm that this takes and the message that maybe some people don't see that their talents are worthy, or have merit. Nice work. ~ Geez.
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Candlewitch
Tue, 2022-05-31 08:39
hello, Edward,
I agree with Geezer's assessment. I really like this poem it flows smoothly. my favorite lines are:
But all he can
find is the
empty space
held within
his mind.
*hugs, Cat
*
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Edward nigma
Tue, 2022-05-31 15:57
My message
Is you don’t know how much talent you have until it’s gone.
https://youtu.be/SHAYboVGur0
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.
Candlewitch
Wed, 2022-06-01 07:33
thank you. *hugs, Cat
thank you.
*hugs, Cat
*
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