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My Prayer
O God!
Help the youth the truth to know
In four years fasting and rumbles
Living in an abject of poverty and tears
Great lofty pains attain
To build a nation where peace
And justice shall reign.
Help the youth the truth to know
In sorrow of slavery and humiliation
Under a nameless power
Great sadness attain
To build a nation where peace
And justice shall reign.
O God!
Help the youth the truth to know.
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
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Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Mr joghe
Wed, 2023-03-08 00:37
Bravery comment!
Bravery comment!
I really appreciate your use of words.
"Words are currency of ideas and have the power to change world. Ride your pen on the rough road."