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Chariot To Hell
Black body
Laced in golden flames
Nevermind the horses
A hemi will do just fine
She revved the engine
And started her descent
A steel powerhouse bouncing
Against nitrous embers
Satan heard her coming
And shook his head
He was in for it now
His wife was amongst the dead
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
RoseBlack
Sat, 2023-02-11 10:53
Thank you
For catching the spelling error...much appreciated...glad you enjoyed
~RoseBlack~
Rosewood Apothecary
Sun, 2023-02-12 13:44
Ok so I’m not sure if you did this deliberately
So yeah the Hemi. Hemispheric pistons are the hallmark of Dodge, Plymouth and Chrysler. Who’s logo is what?? A ram!! The Horned god, Baphomet to me. Satan to non pagan infidels. That’s deep symbolism.!.!
Tim
RoseBlack
Sun, 2023-02-12 18:03
Unintentional
But must be why it resonated with me...plus I prefer hemi to horses...
~RoseBlack~