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Austin Schowe
Today, I saw boy that looked just like you.
At least how I remember you...
Light brown hair.
Short, straight, spiky...
He had your style
and your smile,
and he smiled at me.
I smiled back politely
but my heart sank
because he wasn't you.
I sat in the parking lot
a few extra seconds
to see him once more.
I know I'll never see him again
just like I'll never see you again.
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Last few words:
I miss you, my dear friend.
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Fri, 2024-02-02 02:10
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