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Artists
Everyday losers possessing ability
to pretty up the bullshit;
or send it flaming
in vibrant cohesion's
restoring the reasons
for bypassing the banality
of everything, other than
the naked meaningful moment
and place it for all who see.
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
themoonman
Wed, 2010-12-22 09:19
Hiya Shirley...
thanks for reading ... I hope all is well on your side of the water.
Kailashana2
Mon, 2010-12-20 08:53
Yeah, well, so much for much
Yeah, well, so much for much ado about nothing.
;-)
Hug,
~
themoonman
Wed, 2010-12-22 09:21
Hi Anna ...
ain't that the truth.
thanks
lou
Mon, 2010-12-20 12:45
ouch
ouch
lou
Stand tall, be proud to be who you are, give the world the finger!!!!
themoonman
Wed, 2010-12-22 09:22
Lol....
How are ya Lou?
mona
Tue, 2010-12-21 12:38
Burning as hell "ouch
Burning as hell "ouch.
I would love to know what is your inspiration
love it too much
"enjoyable,simple, and well written".
Mona Rose
themoonman
Wed, 2010-12-22 09:29
Hello Mona ...
Life my dear, Life. I am a big fan of the arts, and if history tells us
anything about artists, whether it be poets, painters, musicians ...
most struggle during their entire lives, and are never known, some
are ... but usually after they are dead. This dedication is given to
the artists that have captured the beauty of Life's moments, and
given of themselves and their beings, and to all that ever will.
thank you Mona for reading and asking your question
Richard
ziggy
Fri, 2010-12-24 16:05
hi again
hello your responce to mona, i like wat your saying there
the first couple of lines says it all in this one lol
havea great xmas , wishes from ireland to you ,,,,,,,,zigs
I salute anyone who breaks the rules in the interest of art and great poetry writing just as much as I admire poets who craft meter and verse within the confines of good grammar. Walk the tight rope or jump from it and see if you can fly.
Candlewitch
Tue, 2010-12-28 12:19
Dear Richard,
I'm with Ziggy on this one, but my wishes come from southern Wisconsin.
love, Cat
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When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Hooded Stranger
Tue, 2010-12-28 12:22
Richard
Richard,
this has to be one of your best.
Perfectly short but with enough content to be fulfilling.
I love the message you are conveying here.
You have wishes from Ireland and South Wisconsin, so not to leave you out, happy new year wishes from Stonehenge UK.
regards,
HS
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Victorclaude
Tue, 2010-12-28 20:25
Reminds of the old maxim:
Reminds of the old maxim: "You can't bullshit a bullshitter!" Or, you have been spotted.
Pretty cool write!
Victor
"When a pickpocket meets a holy man all he sees are his pockets."
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