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Poetic Creations
It takes so long to let her live,
From way down deep, of herself, she shall give.
Innocent, unaware, helped with most care.
My love or my hell, to be done so well.
For weeks I sat and thought of her.
The words I write for her do say,
My love through night and through the day,
You surely live a lonely way.
Doubt and re-doubt.
Each line a part sought,
Each word carefully brought.
Thought and re-thought,
Taken to a whole,
Remains part of my soul.
Style / type:
Free verse
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Comments
Geezer
Wed, 2024-03-13 21:48
You sure do...
have a voice! It says volumes. An affirmation of love. Nicely done sir. ~ Geez.
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mark
Wed, 2024-03-13 22:49
I sure do
finally.
Thanks Geez,
Mark
Lavender
Thu, 2024-03-14 19:39
Poetic Creations
Hello, Mark,
I can sense the need for the words to be precise and carefully chosen. A tender, thoughtful poem.
Thank you,
L
mark
Fri, 2024-03-15 23:18
Hello
Getting the words right is a goal.
Thanks,
Mark
Michael Anthony
Wed, 2024-04-24 00:16
Congrats Marky-Mark! Best
Congrats Marky-Mark!
Best
Michael Anthony
mark
Wed, 2024-04-24 00:35
Hey Mikey Thanks
Mikey likes it!
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Geezer
Wed, 2024-04-24 09:09
Congratulations...
on your win! Nicely done. ~ Geez.
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