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The In-Between
Concealed in the darkness of time,
Gone are the wondrous years of my prime,
My thread never sliced by the fates,
Untouched by death’s unforgiving gates,
I do not live nor am I dead,
To Cronos I forever pled,
Becoming free from residing in between,
Let me roam to where I am once again seen,
Fearsome I am certainly not,
A vow of obedience I have brought,
Not agreeing to free my deserving self,
You will soon feel the wrath of my full health,
I will enjoy returning to where I was once loved,
And never again into this insanity will I be shoved,
I will bring righteousness to this world again,
Even if I have to meet the end of all ends.
Style / type:
Structured: Western
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Tue, 2024-02-27 11:40
Hello Dystopia,
It is very nice to meet you! Your poem put me in mind of Piers Anthony's Incarnations Of Immortality series, which I really enjoyed! my favorite lines are:
My thread never sliced by the fates,
Untouched by death’s unforgiving gates,
I do not live nor am I dead,
To Cronos I forever pled,
*Always, Cat
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Dystopia
Tue, 2024-02-27 14:03
Thank you so much Cat!
Thank you so much Cat!