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A silent seed
A subtly
silent seed
blatantly
begins to bleed
out it’s
neurotic
numbing need .
To passionately
plunge through
the persistent
pounding palms
of pressure
and proceed
to succeed .
Gradually growing
into the grimy
grasps of greed.
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Comments
Ray Whitaker
Thu, 2022-09-22 15:57
Great meter
nicely done!
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Edward nigma
Thu, 2022-09-22 16:55
Thank you
My inspiration
https://youtu.be/0_pKRMptrFI
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.
large marge
Sun, 2022-09-25 23:30
Goor rhythm
I really like the rhythm of this. I imagine myself as the seed and that the preassures are lessons.