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A hopeless heart
I stare
at that sky
bright and clear .
trying to hold
back my tears.
While my mind
flees
into the futures
Flames of fear .
Where
deep down
there lies
a hopeless heart
bashed to broken.
Desperately trying
to put its pieces
of perfection
back into place .
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Comments
Edward nigma
Mon, 2021-09-13 08:57
My inspiration
https://youtu.be/5UdnWsEM8YQ
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.
Geezer
Tue, 2021-09-14 07:37
Perfection is...
an illusion that never is achieved. Broken hearts heal imperfectly, and I grieve for thee. You have written a haunting poem that
tries hard to glue the psyche back together. ~ Geez.
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Edward nigma
Tue, 2021-09-14 17:16
Thank you
Well perfection is fiction it can never happen
Hlm life without literature is a life without logic.