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I Wonder
The pattern
of seashells
The silence
of deer
The feelings
of trees
The scent
of cinnamon
The color
of your eyes.
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Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Lavender
Thu, 2020-11-05 09:35
Good morning, Jerry!
When I wrote this, I felt it was someone imagining meeting a new lover - but it also reminded me of many of my thoughts when I was expecting the birth of my children. Much to ponder in life!
Thank you!
L
Captain
Wed, 2020-11-04 23:04
Beautiful. Nuf said.
Beautiful. Nuf said.
Lavender
Thu, 2020-11-05 09:36
Hello, Captain
Thank you very much for reading and your kind comment!
Appreciated!
Lavender
lovedly
Thu, 2020-11-05 11:33
beauty lies in poetry
if it speaks oceanic
within one autumn leaf
urs is
'tis
just by the way
my eyes are
cynosure
Lavender
Thu, 2020-11-05 12:35
Hello, Lovedly
As always, thank you very much!
L
Lavender
Thu, 2020-11-05 21:24
Hello, Teddy
(Thought I responded earlier today. Not certain where my first attempt may have found itself. ???)
I share your hope that masks and social distancing will fade away - sooner than later, but safely for sure. Thank you for reading! I am always grateful when you stop by.
L
Lavender
Thu, 2020-11-05 21:28
Hi, Jerry
You are too funny... So, is your puppy wearing a Super Hero costume?!
L
c lynn brooks
Sat, 2020-11-07 15:12
Lavender
your poem just sent my mind in motion the simplicity of this work is just beautiful loved it
Chrys
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Lavender
Sun, 2020-11-08 10:48
Hello, Chrys
Life is full of endless things to wonder about. Thank you for your lovely comments.
L