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....worth.......
slick backed visage
streaming shower
stop
like candles
burning fluently
as caresses
smooth as flesh
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Comments
loved
Sat, 2013-03-02 08:57
wow really
exotic....
you are a distinctly
distinct one..
poet
on Neo's
panel
loved
Esker
Sat, 2013-03-02 09:08
Fifties to modern era
burt lancaster and a starlet on a beach
Here to Eternality
Flashdance
pyscho
any car motorbike scene
the muses with hair slicked back
streaming
u tube...information via interweb now
like unwinding
all thoughts sensation coursing through
like an Un Gasm
the un becoming of built up expectation
channeled through avenunes of
pain or pleasure
Love or Hate
then that stop
the four wheel tire hop lock up
the half skid heel down
bike turn
crashing crecendo scream
and gasp
the afterglow of apiphanies
tingling the soul
the body
the spirit
in that heart pounding
lung burning
wide eyed blurry focal
glow
back to living in the skin
living in the body
the NOW
candles of primitive
light need
votive for the prayer
or ceremony of
loss or exhultation
sensation and intelligence
and the wild spirit
Thank You!