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Wondering
I wonder as I wait,
Wonder what the world is like.
The paradox of life still puzzles me -
Those living are sometimes more than dead,
Those dying are just beginning to live,
Those dead are sometimes more than living.
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Structured: Western
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
Keith Logan
Fri, 2017-07-21 04:06
Hello WonderWoods
I probably won't do this justice as I have a headache severe enough to mar concentration. I enjoyed the paradox so much I thought for a moment that was the title.Good word choice (it must have been tempting to use more flowery language).
Keith Logan
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WonderWoods
Fri, 2017-07-21 21:55
Wondering
Hello Happy Chappy,
Thank you for the kind words. I hope you are feeling better now. Be careful. A friend of mine has been suffering from Lyme disease and he has experienced head aches and joint pain. Be mindful of your surroundings and take care of yourself.
WonderWoods