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wist
the edge
strong cuts away the swath
the vestige wraiths like sails keep
I am a halo bound to earth
I feel the strain of your wings
beautiful and raised
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Comments
Esker
Thu, 2012-11-01 12:08
For "A"
a true angel amongst the ordinary~
judyanne
Thu, 2012-11-01 21:02
short
and full of visuals and emotion
awesome - as usual
love judy
xxx
'Each for the joy of the working, and each, in his separate star,
shall draw the Thing as he sees It, for the God of Things as They are.'
(Rudyard Kipling)
loved
Fri, 2012-11-02 00:48
AWESOME YES
but explain some
loved
Esker
Fri, 2012-11-02 07:27
night in the drunk tank
not yet grounded although home
for the moment
this is a poem for someone very dear to me
loved
Fri, 2012-11-02 10:40
You meant to say all that sweet poem was about drinking
drinking what??
where with whom
answer thread bare
if to ask
Loved can dare!
loved
Nordic cloud
Fri, 2012-11-02 11:36
Savour the bite that grips
Savour the bite that grips
the sails fill
the breeze cuts rainbows
round your poem.
I love to clip and fold paper,
Love to you Steven from Ann.
Its for Anna, of course, I know that.
"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.