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Win Or Lose,You Choose
NOBEL PRIZE WINNERS
One such winner
Had your kind
Of an idea
When he felt deprived
So he decided to work hard
And
Make him rich
And
Finally landed with a Nobel Prize
And
All the accompanied perks
But in his simple conclusive talk
He has amply clarified
Luck for success
Is very important,
A rich man’s son will be rich,
A poor mans poor,
But to over come ill luck
Don’t just sit
Try and earn a Nobel
Like me
And
If you can't get it
You will still be happy,
That you did try like me,
Not the Nobel guy,
But I, me lhlhlh
Style / type:
Free verse
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I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
loved
Thu, 2010-12-09 12:12
Nobel
Perhaps
wanted to dynamite
the mountains to till
but we humans
dynamite
to kill
Glad you read my poem
which time had so stilled
since long
twas perhaps
Gods will.
Please also do read
my poem on
IAN
loved
weirdelf
Fri, 2015-01-02 14:58
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cheers,
Jess
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lovedly
Fri, 2015-01-02 22:42
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let the balls roll