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trance dance in France
when I compose
I go into a trance
as if I'm in Paris
in France
or going around in romance
yes prance
as I poetically dance
obscure to the world around
I am to be spectacularly found
NOT to any law bound!
poetry is emotional display
we play
our own way
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
alidzain
Thu, 2015-07-02 05:31
aah
a little play with some rhyme I see.
I wish I could rhyme well,
but most of the time its's hell
to keep it going for me
that's why I envy you, see?
When I compose
I hope its not prose
Hate to irritate Mr Wes
want to give my best
I fly into wonderland
where elves wander hand in hand
and fairies danced in the night
their motion filled with delight
I plunged into darkness
to see its many faces
and form a balance in my write
of shadows and glory light
Now this little poem I offer
doesn't make me a rhyme master
just a practing student
learning from you for self-betterment.
Alid
lovedly
Thu, 2015-07-02 09:26
UR RHYMING IS
aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
ouchhhhhhhhhhhh
like laying on the couch
enjoying music
lovely alidz
alidzain
Thu, 2015-07-02 13:15
hehe
glad you liked it.
Alid
lovedly
Thu, 2015-07-02 14:08
must as ur
future chair
man!!!!!!!
scribbler
Thu, 2015-07-02 19:14
Aw come on loved, you left out pants,
glance, instance, hesitance, cadence and a few others lol. But seriously a fun read............stan
lovedly
Thu, 2015-07-02 23:17
twas meant to be
without pants on naturally stan
ur a man
u ought to know
pun intended