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Time
Mystery in a circle of sixty,
You are man’s greatest obsession.
In unseen track you fly,
Lifting light and letting heavy crawl.
Undoubtedly present in every century,
In seconds, minutes and hours,
You turn today to yesterday and tomorrow to now.
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Comments
Lavender
Wed, 2021-01-27 09:10
Time
Hello, Oriii,
What a stunning piece. Mysterious and thoughtful, but so obvious and significant. Really like this.
Thank you!
L
I_am_Oriii
Wed, 2021-01-27 10:26
Thank you Lavender I really
Thank you Lavender I really appreciate your thought
Oriii
I_am_Oriii
Wed, 2021-01-27 10:28
Thank you Teddy. I'm excited
Thank you Teddy. I'm excited you find it stunning.
Oriii
chima ononogbu
Thu, 2021-01-28 00:28
Beautiful piece Ori
The piece takes one deep into self. So nice. Thanks.
Bathe yourself with poetry and let the world go to pieces.
I_am_Oriii
Tue, 2021-02-16 17:49
I appreciate
Thank you so much for your thought and advice I do appreciate
Oriii
Geezer
Thu, 2021-01-28 07:49
I like...
your observations on time! I especially enjoyed: "Mystery in a circle of sixty." It sounds so "mysterious!" ~ Geezer.
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This must be the place, 'cause there ain't no place like this place anywhere near this place.
I_am_Oriii
Tue, 2021-02-16 17:52
Thanks
Thank you Geezer I am glad u find the poem catchy and mysterious
Oriii
I_am_Oriii
Fri, 2021-05-28 06:49
Wow I'm so glad you thought
Wow I'm so glad you thought of that exceptional movie LUCY while reading my piece... Thank you
Oriii