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Teacher's Pet
Teacher and schoolgirl ran away
out of the playground he wanted to play
for a long time she was groomed
in his presence, she bloomed
Teachers pet, lots of treats
extra stars and tasty sweets
he boosted her self-esteem
believing she shared his dream
He forgot about his loving wife
thought they would build a new life
he took her away to a hotel
thoughts of their activities, I quell
Now she's home, safe and sound
her parents joy, knows no bounds
physically she seems fine
mentally, who can define?
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Structured: Western
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Comments
Frenchf
Tue, 2012-12-25 19:09
Lovely ode to Jeremy Forrest
Send it to the evening standard!
sueb
Wed, 2012-12-26 07:58
thanks a mil x
thanks a mil x