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Sweetness you are missed (Like a SUNUKU)
Sweetness you are missed
Sunku
has taken over the
Neo's full page
Sweetness
of real poetry
has been deranged
None read
generic poems
Why compose them
Amen
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
swamp-witch
Fri, 2018-03-09 11:47
Hey Loved,
We don't get many poems about Neopoet! Maybe this one could have been a blog instead, but I understand your frustration (at least it seems like frustration) that there are so many sunku submissions right now. I still hope you will feel excited to see that all these sunku submissions mean that people are vigorously workshoping and learning! That's a dream come true for me.
Will be checking some of your other recent work when I can.
Take care,
Kelsey
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lovedly
Sat, 2018-03-10 01:21
been waiting Kelsey
yes you alone
I N S P I R E
me
rflol