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Subliminal Pretext
Humidity is warm
the needles stiff sharp arm
points its per cent
"Your wit is a work"
Shall I fetch tea?
do be a dear..........
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Comments
weirdelf
Sat, 2015-06-06 18:50
Feels a tad non sequitur-ish, even for me
nice tone though.
cheers,
Jess
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