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Straight From Your Pen
Great poetry comes straight from
Pens of great poets
Not stifled by egos
That hinder
Willing to work on weaknesses taking liberties
Born from loins and wombs
Not literal, just poetical
That heals
Inner self tortured by soul
Flaming with passion and distresses
Straight from your pen
Titles were created, inducing
Creativity, flexibility in
Writing grandeur poems
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
China Blue
Thu, 2012-02-09 19:11
Barbara
Nicely done and thank you for using my title suggestion that is greatly appreciated
Chrys
Chrys
Let your mercy spill on all these burning hearts in hell(Leonard Cohen)
Barbara Writes
Thu, 2012-02-09 23:37
Chrys
You are welcome. It just fit perfectly with my idea for a poem that expresses this workshop in view
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Barbara Writes
Thu, 2012-02-09 23:35
Mark
Those pesky typos. Thanks glad you pointed them out
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scribbler
Thu, 2012-02-09 23:23
Hi Barb
I see Mark beat me to the 1st stanza typos lol. And you're right about great poetry and titles coming from great poets while we lesser ones struggle to be just OK...........stan
Barbara Writes
Thu, 2012-02-09 23:30
Ahhh don't even try it
You are one of the great ones. Modesty is your crown.
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