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SOLITARY MOMENT
the lone wolf
falls prey to uncertainty
the fury of time
©® Onyinyechi Cosmos Etu
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How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
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Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
Sat, 2023-01-14 20:43
Again
This is really something else.
It might be stronger like this
the lone wolf
falls prey to uncertainty
the fury of time
But really it’s spectacular as is.
Tim
Jackweb
Sun, 2023-01-15 03:29
Thanks a bunch
For the eagle eye. That suits well.
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Candlewitch
Sun, 2023-01-15 04:33
dear Onyinechi
this is lovely. I want more!
*hugs, Cat
*
When someone reads your work
And responds, please be courteous
And reply in kind, thanks.
Jackweb
Sun, 2023-01-15 05:31
Thanks Cat!
I'm glad you liked it. It will keep coming your way!
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Lavender
Mon, 2023-01-16 18:47
Solitary Moment
Hi, Jackweb,
This is strong. I can feel the keen sense of anxiety. Perfect title.
Lav
Jackweb
Tue, 2023-01-17 14:41
Wow!!
Thanks a bunch esteemed poet.
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Clentin
Mon, 2023-02-13 14:04
I can relate to the strong
I can relate to the strong emotional feelings.
Good job