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Random challenge 6 Topic 1- I can
I can every thing that can be canned
I can summer and fall, at my canning stand
I can can a bull cannibal like nobody can
I can lips, noses, eyeballs and can can a hand
I can audience laughter for playing in loop
I can things quite disgusting, I can even can poop
I can leeches and frogs and once even a brain
I can toenails and fungus. I'm canning insane!
I can up my thoughts and my dreams when I can
I can and I do, so I can 'cause I can
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Last few words:
I thought that I could. It seems that I can.
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Candlewitch
Tue, 2022-03-01 11:51
hello,
I got a big kick out of reading this, thanks for the laughs!
*hugs. Cat
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