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PUSH ME
Like a delicate flower
YES,
I endured through
Many battles of stormy weather
Day and night
rain and shine
And that I stay strong
Like a delicate flower
I STAY SURVIVED
Through many hardships
Of thirst quest and bitterness cold
I NEVER GIVE UP
Like a delicate flower, I have never
resign my beauty title
I still stand tall
to carry on my petals with
grace and poise
Like a delicate flower, I have passed through
many capricious seasons to come
with the various change in life
Yet, I still hold myself up high
Like a delicate flower, I was TOLD
As a fragile and vulnerable image portray
That I could NOT overcome my way
Above of all I have surpassed through many
Obstacles as it comes
That instilled determination
To conquer of all
To grow into
A beautiful and enchanting display
Comments
Rosewood Apothecary
Sat, 2023-01-07 15:48
Delicate but tenacious
Flowers grow out of the cracks in concrete and lotuses do not let the muck they’re rooted in effect their blooming.
Excellent summation
“Above of all I have surpassed through many
Obstacles as it comes
That instilled determination
To conquer of all
To grow into
A beautiful and enchanting display”
Great lines
Tim
Hon
Mon, 2023-01-09 11:46
Thank you for the compliment
Hi, thank you for the compliment.