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Power Outtage
verse-
head against the wall
i'm waiting for your call
but i know you can't right now
the safety net is stretching
every time i fall
and they've got me figured out
bridge-
yes i'm scared to death
but does it mean a thing?
yes i said i miss you
but that couldn't give you wings
chorus-
blackout
turn the lights out
i gotta get out
before i go crazy again
shout
scream it out loud
how this love will be stronger
than the rest
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
really, really rough draft! an old song i'm completely ripping apart and putting back together. change a verse, add a bridge, and bam! new song!
Editing stage:
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Comments
emogothgirl
Sun, 2012-01-15 20:07
i see...
i think i'll try that with the other half of the song; great idea.
thanks,
mag
emogothgirl
Sun, 2012-01-15 20:11
thanks!
it is, i'm determined to finish it, at one time or another. to the death! haha.
thanks,
mag
scribbler
Sun, 2012-01-15 17:27
hi
Probably needs a bit more length to be really effective. Should this be read in a beat similar to Hank Williams Jr.? lol..........stan
emogothgirl
Sun, 2012-01-15 20:09
yeah
the shredding of former writing will take some time; it WILL BE LONGER! and i don't think so stan. :P
thanks for stopping by,
mag