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Poetic ink
#Poetic_Ink
Earth in standing ovation, life applauding for my renaissance,my journey acquires new tracks, my wings nurtured, setting my territory, both in the sky and upon surfaces of humans,my story begins, warriors and legends competing for characters,
I, a lineage that refuse to be forgotten, tremor plagues all four cardinals, oceans cease in their motions, mesmerized to my entrance, forefather's hails my totem, blood in my veins start to boil, stirred by impatience, creativity sparks my heart, poetry flowing out of my mind uncontrollably, fear strikes earth hearts, dismantled attentions, dispersing emotions,
touch grounds with a multi painting brush in my hand, art acquires new meaning, the poetic ink meaning, I die not till all long starved creative minds are well fed, fed from my poetic cauldron, my creative slate ravenous, spewing scrumptious and mind liking lyrical verses,
in my order calling regalia, commanding attentions to near and afar, in my creative channels, brewing encrypted codes, meant for eternity, yesterday evoked, today provoked, tomorrow restless. Stretching my poetic binoculars, poetic ink creating riots in the predestination,
every mind with its hands on the waist, startled by the creative flow in my ink as it leaves evey nearby encounter with creativity blisters, setting the whole cosmos on its feet, my storyline with a new author, poetic ink, rewritten again and again, the world at awe, poetic ink reciting praises never encountered before, at the forefront of life, my name in golden bold prints, imitating heaven gates, my line far attached, blend of spirituality and creativity, creatuality!
keeping the ear listening and the mind in loop holes, grasping the air, poetic ink in transit, my presence calls for precautiary measures, inked like notes, useless, my crippling walk,walking on minds with my poetry brush, poetic ink
#Poetic_Ink
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neopoet
Thu, 2024-10-17 09:22
Neopoet AI 5-29-23 version
The below is a computer-generated response from Neo, Neopoet's computer artificial intelligence:
The poem "Poetic Ink" is rich in imagery and uses powerful language to convey the speaker's confidence and ambition as a poet. The metaphor of poetic ink as a transformative force that captivates and inspires is compelling. The poem effectively explores the idea of creativity as a potent and unstoppable force that leaves a lasting impact on the world.
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Candlewitch
Thu, 2024-10-17 05:55
Dear Poetic ink,
This is a rousing read, goes well with my morning coffee! Welcome to Neopoet... I will be watching the stream for more of your poetic works. It is very nice to meet you!
*hugs, Cat
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Morepje KO
Thu, 2024-10-17 09:00
Dear CandleWitch
Thank you... I'm humbled by your response
Poetic_Ink
Morepje KO
Thu, 2024-10-17 09:01
Dear CandleWitch
And also thank you for welcoming
Poetic_Ink