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P H E L L
there are shadows
written on the land
like bloodstained
pursuits
like abandoned holy grounds
where sacred spirits dwell
where snow falls
the dead ash of ideals
there are stirring currents
flickering
brilliant like the hot want
of sunlight on a chilled day
and Moons swift in passage
through a month of pain
for all the lost
and all the found
the truths will
be
and all shall see
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Comments
weirdelf
Thu, 2012-01-19 20:29
Flawless.
nothing more to say.
cheers,
Jess
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Esker
Thu, 2012-01-19 20:39
Phlaw less
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Nordic cloud
Fri, 2012-02-10 12:05
Shakespearean Phelling
Shakespearean Phelling
compelling intense
rolling breakers out at sea.
Ann
"The image of yourself which you see in a mirror Is dead,
but the reflection of the moon on water, lives." Kenzan.