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ONE CATCH
One more stroke
of cypress paddle,
that my dad made,
in crystal waters
of a calm lake.
And this old jon boat
glides forward a bit
leaving hardly a ripple behind;
then coasts to a stop.
My nine foot fly rod
of split bamboo
whips gracefully
as a magician's wand
with just a whhiiiiissp
of line through guides.
A minuscule pause
while line straightens out
behind me..
then with a wrist flip
I power the line forward.
It drops with its passenger,
a foam body spider,
exactly where I want
right next to a shallow stump.
where I let it lie...and lie
until all is still..
Then with trees reflecting
off mercurial water
I move the fly the slightest bit
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The peace ENDS
as a bass explodes
sending water spraying
as it jumps shaking its head
A short fight
then supper is subdued
and line is checked for frays.
then
One more stroke.............
Comments
Gracy
Fri, 2020-08-14 14:52
Hi Stan, I didn't know about
Hi Stan, I didn't know about your fishing skills! Yes, it's good, for a change, to see your FV.
You've set the scene deftly, I like the part about supper being subdued!
Enjoyed, will return to read again, best, Gracy
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scribbler
Fri, 2020-08-14 23:40
Hi Gracy
It has been years since I fished with a fly rod. But grandson is getting older and hopefully I'll last long enough to show him how
c lynn brooks
Fri, 2020-08-14 17:06
Stan
what a oure pastoral scene you describe. Lon would have identified with this en totale
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scribbler
Fri, 2020-08-14 23:41
I Expect
he'd like it too. A pity we never got together
scribbler
Fri, 2020-08-14 23:44
LOL
I expect I've caught well under 100 trout lol. But ya'll call bass green trout don't you? In that case I've caught hundreds .Now as to You being a trout.... is this an Italian slang?
scribbler
Sat, 2020-08-15 09:41
Ok
I can see that. Sleek and colorful