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MY FREESTYLE
I am the light behind a flame,
I am the king without a name,
I am different we ain't the same,
I am a star awaiting my fame.
I can paint the devil shining bright,
And wear him a mask looking nice,
I fight better with my pen than a seasoned knight,
My rhymes are too hot, hotter than ice,
I am not bragging, just trying to say,
I am a poet don't get in my way.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
Contest:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Shelby Pryor
Thu, 2023-01-05 20:07
Love it!!!
Love the rhyme and rhythm, it flows together very well. The last two lines sum it up so good. Impressive!
Hussainy
Fri, 2023-01-06 06:07
Thank you so much
Thank you so much
RoseBlack
Fri, 2023-01-06 08:27
Love love love this
Wow! This was awesome!! Sounded like a good start to a poetry battle...
~RoseBlack~
Hussainy
Fri, 2023-01-06 18:08
Thank you so much Poetess
Thank you so much Poetess
Lavender
Fri, 2023-01-06 19:31
My Freestyle
I feel the freestyle! I tripped a bit on the line: "And wear him a mask looking nice" - I believe I understand the meaning, but it doesn't quite flow with ease as does the rest of the poem. The final line is nice and strong, you may want to switch the "into" to simply "in" my way.
I liked this very much,
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Hussainy
Sat, 2023-01-07 09:45
Wow OK thank you
Wow
OK thank you
Rula
Sat, 2023-01-07 14:57
I like it too
I sometimes tripped into some longer lines than others, but guess this is what free style is
I am not a big fan of the free style, and it is always out of my comfort zone.
You did well here I thought and on both levels, the message and the contest requirments.
Very well done
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Hussainy
Mon, 2023-01-09 16:47
Woww thank you very much
Woww thank you very much
Hussainy
Mon, 2023-01-09 16:50
I will follow you on
I will follow you on Instagram please follow me back