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My Bows
It's coz of poets like you
who have sharpened my poetry
from an autumn leaf
you turned me into a poetic soil
manure
no not to forget you all
how you toiled
to pick up a soft blade of grass
to compose a line
like a robot
what an imaginary poetry pen
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
the end is just round the corner..............
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Jackweb
Tue, 2023-01-10 14:28
I can read
a heart expressing gratitude to a master. Yes, sometimes is good to acknowledge those who polished us to become better in our poetry journey.
Beautiful poetic delivery Lovedly!
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"By virtue of creativity, my literary genre is poetry".
~Jackweb
Lavender
Tue, 2023-01-10 21:12
My Bows
Hello, Lovedly,
So much of this has a poetic feel to it - the autumn leaf, the soft blade of grass. I understand the reference to a robot, but the poem feels sensitive and personal - far from robotic. Your title is polished, like a gentleman.
Lav
lovedly
Tue, 2023-01-10 23:59
Thanks to
Jack and
you Lav ..
You make my day today
as always
by your encouragement
o what a blessing
Thanks
Bows .............
Rosewood Apothecary
Wed, 2023-01-11 06:05
Surreal
I do agree that the robot feels out of place. I understand what you’re going for I think. Robotic because we make it look effortless??
I do like this one quite a bit,
Tim
lovedly
Wed, 2023-01-11 07:20
THANKS
TIM