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Moon Walk
We walked together around the moon
hoping we would see our friends
everywhere passing the time.
"Will they be here, do you think?"
“I’m sure of it. They’ve had forever
and a day to jump over it.”
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Review Request (Direction):
What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Last few words:
A little bit of silliness to end the year. This was inspired by a wonderful illustration by an artist going by the name moon_mxtr on Insty. This piece would probably work much better if we could include images on Neopoet - sigh... someday...
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Lavender
Thu, 2022-12-29 12:03
Moon Walk
Michael, you magical poet,
You always make me cry...
L
Michael Anthony
Tue, 2023-01-03 23:45
Awww, thanks L! Glad you
Awww, thanks L! Glad you liked this one.
Best
Michael Anthony
Rosewood Apothecary
Fri, 2022-12-30 05:46
Devoid of the artwork
The poem is still fairly breathtaking
Tim
Michael Anthony
Tue, 2023-01-03 23:46
Thanks Tim! It was a fun
Thanks Tim! It was a fun litle write for me when I was looking for something a little light-hearted.
Cheers
Michael Anthony
Candlewitch
Wed, 2023-01-04 08:23
I Love it!!!
you have a style all your own!
*hugs, Cat
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Michael Anthony
Fri, 2023-01-06 00:07
Thank you Cat! Happy New Year
Thank you Cat! Happy New Year to you and yours!
Best
Michael Anthony