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MIDNIGHT CONVERSATION
My occasional friend
I’m back again
With more tears this time
I’m sure it’s no crime
I do hate myself
I’m on the lowest shelf
I’ve lost my way
Stuck deep in quick clay
My mornings seem to come
With no dew or song
I dare not expect some
I guess that will be wrong
Should I undo my veil of lies?
I wonder; do I even try?
I must wash out my messy brain
And pour my filthy heart down the drain
See, You offer me meat
You wonder why I’m still starving?
…Well, one by one, I pulled out my teeth
So how do I do the chewing?
Oh my bleeding King, why do you keep watch?
My forgotten love, why do you give so much?
My precious LORD… you’re still my sun
So why do I take up this world and run?
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Comments
AmmaKonadu
Sun, 2012-04-29 16:23
Thanks
For leaving such a nice comment.