Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Maybe Baby
Maybe I should have told you how lovely you were
when the sun made you shade your look-away eyes.
Maybe I could have been more help with your troubled daughter
when you spoke of your regrets for her.
Maybe our concert tickets I left for you after we parted
was the right gesture for me to say goodbye.
Maybe I should have realized your crowded past
didn't leave much room for our future.
Maybe maybe just wasn't enough.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
(c) Neopoet.com. No copyright is claimed by Neopoet to original member content.