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Lovely Passion
Passion
helps orgasm
eloquence
titillates one's wisdom...
EGO
NARCISSISM
flamboyant says
all about her inner wears
Victoria's style
secret
silken
like Cashmere ones
soft
ahhhhh
attractive
pretty is the cause
of being a butterfly
which makes you rise
poetic is like luring
come and enjoy the enterprise
I spray with brilliance pal
she seemingly
says
don't fall
just by the way's side
let autumn come
fall then within
be willing
life long
O differently wired
are you man
she too is likewise
not just a woman
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
Fun and Pun intended
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Dandini
Sat, 2020-11-28 13:03
This seemed like a random
This seemed like a random stream of thoughts and images...
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lovedly
Sat, 2020-11-28 14:16
and so neither is it a comment nor
help as a greater poetess
DANd
Dandini
Sun, 2020-11-29 11:16
Sorry about that, I did not
Sorry about that, I did not mean to offend, just expressing an opinion. I shan't bother to do so again.
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lovedly
Sun, 2020-11-29 14:36
no offense
I had asked all to thrash me in my requests
you must teach me how to compose poems
I am trying since last 6 decades
to no avail .
Dandini
Mon, 2020-11-30 09:55
Thrashing is surely an
Thrashing is surely an excessive reaction.
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lovedly
Wed, 2020-12-02 13:55
tnx
Danny
ur bearable as a neo