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Lent
The day has arrived again this year
When we reflect upon the things we have done
and the things we should do
We look inside our wandering minds
Moving forward the thoughts of yesterday
Wiping clean our imperfections
Promising to do better in the coming days
We profess plans and actions
That will act as daily reminders
Now is the time as we look in the mirror
And reflect on the sorrows of life
Reminded by the crossed ashes we see
From last years blessed palms
We clearly remember that “we are dust
and unto dust we shall return”
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Lavender
Wed, 2023-02-22 13:17
Lent
Hello, Clentin,
A time of forgiveness - toward ourselves and others.
Peace~
L
Clentin
Wed, 2023-02-22 13:37
Thank you. Do you think the
Thank you. Do you think the title is ok?
Lavender
Wed, 2023-02-22 14:17
Hi, Clentin,
Lent has such a personal meaning for people. In my youth, and young adult life I was taught to concentrate on remorse, regret, and repentance. As I have matured in spirit, those feelings have been transformed into practicing forgiveness and healing. I think your title may need to be what your personal feeling toward Lent truly is, realizing that your readers may feel uniquely different. It is definitely a unique, very personal journey.
Thank you,
L