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Indirect imagery (imagery workshop)
The peace in pieces, deathly silence.
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wesley snow
Tue, 2017-06-27 19:28
So this is where your link leads.
Still, I have an example only. Where is my explanation. I am a verbal learner, not a sight one. I need explanations.
W. H. Snow
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weirdelf
Tue, 2017-06-27 22:38
well... it's supposed to be indirect imagery
and this just occurred to me. I saw an abandoned battlefield, replete with corpses and smoking ruins.
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scribbler
Tue, 2017-06-27 23:35
yep
peace in pieces can refer to everything from a slight argument to full out war with all which they might entail.
jane210660
Wed, 2017-06-28 11:57
This is what I see
The day after that Christmas day during WW1, when they all played football together..
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