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I DREAM OF YOU
So many years
have been -blossomed by time
I've always taken you for granted
you know it
Now comes the hour
hence forth
I must entrap you in my heart
for the remaining time
then you will continue to be
a part of me
here and there
everywhere I go
you will also
make me glow
this poem
I composed for you
hope you will know
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Last few words:
REVISITED COURTESY
STAN
scribbler
Editing stage:
Content level:
Not Explicit Content
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Comments
Triskelion
Mon, 2022-01-24 12:52
A lovedly ...
sentiment. I hope a part of me can go with you also. Just the good part, though, okay?
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...so like my lost dreams...the flood
lovedly
Mon, 2022-01-24 13:04
Always
So beautiful so kind of you
thanks as always
scribbler
Mon, 2022-01-24 15:13
Hi loved
Don't we all take time for granted? Alas the supply is not endless."To make me glow"....seems forced for some reason; try deleting "to" and see if it works better
lovedly
Mon, 2022-01-24 17:13
MY FRIEND PHILO WHAT AND GUIDE
I MUST ABIDE Thanks Stan
Ray Whitaker
Tue, 2022-01-25 20:56
IMHO this piece
Is the best one you have posted in awhile!
I’ve no suggestions here
Thank you for this!
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lovedly
Tue, 2022-01-25 21:39
When I'm kicked
I become the best footballer
I kick the ball far
likewise 'tis for poetry
this poem is being carried around the world
by inty meaning INTERNET
Many Thanks
our NEOPOET
Ray