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I AM
I am messenger,
I am conveyer of words,
And through my pen;
Delivering thoughts.
Of pasts,
Of mistakes made unwise,
Of hopes,
Of dreams;
and risky schemes.
I am messenger of writing pages long,
And that message gets told in many ways strong,
And at the end of the day
All I ask reader of mine,
That I have told the story accurately well.
So you see,
I am messenger,
I am conveyer of words,
And it is through my pen,
That I fulfill dreams.
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing stage:
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Comments
c lynn brooks
Fri, 2020-04-17 09:15
Francis
A bit choppy in my opinioon may I suggest either I or The as I am the(a) messenger to smooth the lines some otherwise I enjoyed reading this poem
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Francis Cooper - Mac
Thu, 2020-04-23 03:38
Poem I Am
My main premise when I write a piece is that it has a beginning, a middle and an ending and it tells a story overall....Francis
Gracy
Fri, 2020-04-17 21:35
Hi Francis, I agree with Lynn
Hi Francis, I agree with Lynn, your poem is a bit choppy and many words can be tweaked so that you can write it with fewer lines. Otherwise, enjoyed.
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scribbler
Sat, 2020-04-18 11:37
I
Think the choppiness might actually reflect how the thoughts might come when trying to describe ourselves
Simon
Sat, 2020-04-18 15:33
Hi,Lynn got it
Sometimes we write I a hurry and some of these little mistakes happens, well fulfillment is all we writers ever think of. Nice one
Leslie
Fri, 2024-01-26 05:39
Mac
I got it, good job and listen to Simon. We all must learn not to take things personally.
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