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Hope (rhyming haiku)
A light here to stay
Within my soul every day
Showing me the way
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Comments
RoseBlack
Sat, 2023-11-18 07:12
Simple
Yet says a lot. I really like Haiku and I like how yours rhymes. Well done.
~RoseBlack~
Clentin
Sat, 2023-11-18 07:14
Thank you Rose, I appreciate
Thank you Rose, I appreciate your reading and your comments.
PS: love your poems
RoseBlack
Sat, 2023-11-18 07:25
Thanks Clentin
I always appreciate your feedback
~RoseBlack~
Tawny023
Sat, 2023-11-18 21:53
Nice
Just a few words and so illuminating
Clentin
Sun, 2023-11-19 03:04
Thank you for your comments.
Thank you for your comments. I appreciate it very much
Clentin
Sun, 2023-11-19 03:06
Yes I know that there is no
Yes I know that there is no real form of rhyming haiku. I just wanted to try rhyming my poem.
Thank you for your comments.
Clentin
Sun, 2023-11-19 06:56
Thanks
Thanks