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Histornity's Song
Heightened imaginations
stemmed from not owning a lot of things;
faith in God, and family
in a land where all were kings;
receiving all the blessings each life brings.
Each agenda far from hidden
we were the flock, and God the "word";
at a time of innovation
from pure genius to the absurd;
with the best soundtrack music ever heard.
Our skies, truly the limit
and our faith knew no bounds;
under the band named, Noland
we explored through music, and sounds;
to this day our playlist still astounds.
Myriad influenced
the music sets me free;
still learning, ever honing
the song inside of me;
every tune, each lyric, and harmony.
My happiest existence
sharing music with my friends;
I am mindful of the message
my song ultimately sends;
ever grateful for each ear the listener lends.
Perpetually evolving
I continue with my song;
to perfect my finished product
I correct which parts seem wrong;
maybe the music will help eternity not seem so long.
We each possess within us
a song that is our own;
and we'll be judged by the "score"
and how much we each have grown;
when we return to a love much brighter than any known.
Comments
Roscoe Lane
Tue, 2011-11-08 03:13
If i'm correct,
If i'm correct the word histornity is made up of two words History and Eternity, and works for me. The theme is great as with the logic, i liked this a lot. Great poem one i can relate to very easily. Regards Roscoe..
Roscoe Llane,
Religion will rip your faith off, and return
for the mask of disbelief that's left.
docmaverick
Wed, 2011-11-09 22:26
You are correct....
...dear, friend Roscoe. Thanx, for your input.
Appreciatedly so,
doc.
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wesley snow
Tue, 2011-11-08 19:25
Very interesting.
I liked the "off" meter lines. wesley
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docmaverick
Thu, 2011-11-10 06:30
Thanx, friend snowman....
...almost always "on".....and slightly "off".
doc.
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