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Hidden Hearts (Sylvia Plath)
Standing in the sun.
A hidden nothing
Trapped beneath the sky?
Sister pass the message-
From girl on the wind-
To girl, to flying girl.
To not be caught
When in a free fall.
Pass the message!
Cracked
Felled
A tree gone-
Into the silent night,
My friend pass it.
The good fortune-
Of joining this girl-
In this smooth death.
Understand it now.
An arrow shot off
Into the dark.
Into a heart.
No one is anything.
If you paint over the chips-
Friend, nothings gone bent.
Drip.
Drip your heart.
Life is a two part
Cirus, heathens all around.
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Comments
Obadiah Grey
Sun, 2022-04-10 10:15
loved this!
loved this!
very impressive.
obi.