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half of my entity
hand in hand
in the back seat
of a white jeep
two souls experiencing love
could've been lust
that's not what it was
lovers that stop time
a twin flame
my love
how i adore you
your everything
light of my life
beat in my heart
blood in my veins
a power source
a piece of me
half of my entity
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Free verse
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veeenby
Tue, 2020-12-08 08:05
Hi. I used the right word.
Hi. I used the right word. Its to be read as "I adore you, and your everything" but without and. However, thank you!!