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A FRIENDLY PRAYER
If only we knew
RUMI would never have been born.....
Time lends him a shoulder of legendary
years hence since he's gone
O Rumi hear my heart
My soul slaps me...
can I ever be another Rumi
ever like thee, tell me
O Rumi
I lose friendz
all of 'em in the walk
of wilderness of time
sad to say without any reason or rhyme
Tell me friendz,
If my love alone is the reason for my crime
then tell me also
how with moderna kinds of friends
I must
CHIME...
Style / type:
Free verse
Review Request (Intensity):
I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing stage:
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Comments
lovedly
Wed, 2017-03-29 15:43
Yeah
one has to do something extraordinary
to catch an eagle's eye
such as yours