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Clean? (A little rant)
Why don't you wash your weary thoughts,
and brush out your heavy woes and pains.
Wipe out those tears in eyes,
and sweep everyday's miseries away.
Bleach all the stained ,
and the spotted hatreds in your heart
clean it all and say:
Hey..
"Everything is gonna be OKAY."
Last few words:
An old write, thought I'd share it with you
as a lightsome little piece...Hope you enjoy.
Editing stage:
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Comments
Ian.T
Fri, 2012-05-04 03:36
Rula
I will have another go at cleaning up lol. Loved the simplicity of this write for such a big job, Yours Ian.T
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There are a million reasons to believe in yourself,
So find more reasons to believe in others..
Rula
Fri, 2012-05-04 08:10
Thanks dear Ian ..I am happy
Thanks dear Ian ..I am happy you've dusted this piece and gave it
a tidy L00k...Appreciated:-)
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