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Can't
I'm not able, I won't, I can't
this is the weak person's chant
makes me want to rant
try to stay calm but I can't
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Structured: Western
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I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
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Comments
weirdelf
Wed, 2013-01-02 06:41
oh go and listen to some Tony Robbins tapes or something
this poem is almost as lame as my last one.
cheers,
Jess
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sueb
Wed, 2013-01-02 07:30
thanks Jess who's Tony
thanks Jess who's Tony Robbins
weirdelf
Wed, 2013-01-02 08:25
He is one of those "ispirational, motivational" spealers
I despised the concept for a long time but his ideas are pretty cool
Anthony Robbins downloadable.
cheers,
Jess
A new workshop on the most important element of poetry-
'Rhythm and Meter in Poetry'
https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/rhythm-and-meter-poetry
Frenchf
Wed, 2013-01-02 20:18
I am not registered to critique
But I agree with Jess.this is well below your normal level of skill xx
sueb
Thu, 2013-01-03 04:54
no problem french f thanks
no problem french f thanks for reading and commenting all the best sueb x