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Away From You!
My coffee?
I got it as cold
As the early morning breeze.
How I never realized
That your breath adds
The warmth to every
life detail!
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Comments
zebra
Wed, 2018-12-19 11:52
A perfect piece to remind me
A perfect piece to remind me you can never fully appreciate the presence and love of another unless your inner formulation includes their potential absence Nice write Rula
Rula
Thu, 2018-12-20 01:29
Thank you
really appreciate your comment and value it highly zebra.
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alidzain
Wed, 2018-12-19 14:07
Salam, Rula.
Love this piece.
Khalid
Rula
Thu, 2018-12-20 01:30
Thank you
Khalid... Nice to receive a comment from you bro.
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raj
Sat, 2018-12-22 15:49
Says a lot in such few words
Says a lot in such few words Rula...very meaningful about mere presence of someone else adds value to the experience...if I read it right it underscores the value of togetherness...
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raj (sublime_ocean)
Rula
Mon, 2019-03-04 13:17
Hello raj
not sure how I missed your comment here.
Thank you.
miss your presence. Hope all is well.
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